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Esther Sylvester

  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: [September Contest] Wishes and Stars

    My generator line is "Your story is about a neurologist in a house wishing on stars." (()) (()) (()) She would have loved to have lied; to tell them that ...

    Sep 16, 2010
  • General Articles Re: Mother

    Hi there! I see that you are new to YWS! Welcome. I'm Esther and I will be reviewing you today. Is this really nonfiction? If it is it certainly sad ...

    Sep 16, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Art Murderers (chapter 3, draft)

    Hello RO! Nice to see that you got another chapter up! I'm glad that you told me about it or else I probably wouldn't have found it. That would have ...

    Sep 14, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Bonjour! Zoe is here!

    It's a pleasure to have you on YWS, Zoe! My name is Esther. It seems that we seem to share the same interests! I like to make random quotes too, ...

    Sep 14, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi people

    Welcome to YWS joshik! If you want to learn about writing, you've come to the "write" place. (HAHAHAH..) YWS is a great site for perfecting your craft, as I always ...

    Sep 7, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: !!!Newbie Here!!!

    Welcome to YWS! I guess I already know you because I reviewed you, ha. But I would like to give you a formal welcome anyway. I'm glad that your mom ...

    Sep 2, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi

    Welcome to YWS, Wolfy! (I have the unfortunate habit of giving horrible nicknames. Please don't mind.) YWS is a great place to hone your writing skills and make new friends. ...

    Sep 2, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Dead Nyte- Dead Dream (Chap. 1)

    Hi there! I'm Esther. Pleased to meet you. So this is your first novel, huh? It's a great undertaking, but it is totally worth it by the end. Let's get ...

    Sep 1, 2010
  • Randomosity Re: Would You Rather?

    I would snort the live bee, that's no contest. Have you snorted black pepper before? Not to say that I have or anything.... :shock: ... Would you rather... Walk through ...

    Sep 1, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Broken Crow (Chp. 1, Part 1)

    Hey Enigma! Good ole Esther is ready for a rip roarin' review. Well, let me just say that I am a sucker for this kind of story. I already got ...

    Aug 24, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Running for you

    Hi there! Esther landing in for a review. This was quite good, really. Here are my comments: You need to proof read this. Before you post something, be sure to ...

    Aug 16, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Art Murderers (chapter 2, draft)

    Hey there! I'm back for chapter two! So, this was yet another good chapter! Here are some things I am going to point out: PLOT: The interest is still here. ...

    Aug 14, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Art Murderers (chapter 1, draft)

    Hey there! Gosh, I'm sorry it took me so long to get to your chapters. You don't deserve to wait. I've had a cold lately that wiped me out so ...

    Aug 14, 2010
  • Grammar & Research Re: Punctuation within Dialogue

    This is a great reference! Thank you.

    Aug 10, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: One Last Song

    Hello there! I will be reviewing you today. Ah, what a refreshing fairy tale. I'm a fairy tale lover myself. (I even posted one just now!) You pulled out the ...

    Aug 10, 2010


I cannot separate the aesthetic pleasure of seeing a butterfly and the scientific pleasure of knowing what it is.
— Vladmir Nabokov