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Re: [September Contest] Wishes and Stars
My generator line is "Your story is about a neurologist in a house wishing on stars." (()) (()) (()) She would have loved to have lied; to tell them that ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: Mother
Hi there! I see that you are new to YWS! Welcome. I'm Esther and I will be reviewing you today. Is this really nonfiction? If it is it certainly sad ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: The Art Murderers (chapter 3, draft)
Hello RO! Nice to see that you got another chapter up! I'm glad that you told me about it or else I probably wouldn't have found it. That would have ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Bonjour! Zoe is here!
It's a pleasure to have you on YWS, Zoe! My name is Esther. It seems that we seem to share the same interests! I like to make random quotes too, ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Hi people
Welcome to YWS joshik! If you want to learn about writing, you've come to the "write" place. (HAHAHAH..) YWS is a great site for perfecting your craft, as I always ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: !!!Newbie Here!!!
Welcome to YWS! I guess I already know you because I reviewed you, ha. But I would like to give you a formal welcome anyway. I'm glad that your mom ...
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: Hi
Welcome to YWS, Wolfy! (I have the unfortunate habit of giving horrible nicknames. Please don't mind.) YWS is a great place to hone your writing skills and make new friends. ...
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: Dead Nyte- Dead Dream (Chap. 1)
Hi there! I'm Esther. Pleased to meet you. So this is your first novel, huh? It's a great undertaking, but it is totally worth it by the end. Let's get ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: Would You Rather?
I would snort the live bee, that's no contest. Have you snorted black pepper before? Not to say that I have or anything.... :shock: ... Would you rather... Walk through ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: The Broken Crow (Chp. 1, Part 1)
Hey Enigma! Good ole Esther is ready for a rip roarin' review. Well, let me just say that I am a sucker for this kind of story. I already got ...
Aug 24, 2010 -
Re: Running for you
Hi there! Esther landing in for a review. This was quite good, really. Here are my comments: You need to proof read this. Before you post something, be sure to ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: The Art Murderers (chapter 2, draft)
Hey there! I'm back for chapter two! So, this was yet another good chapter! Here are some things I am going to point out: PLOT: The interest is still here. ...
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: The Art Murderers (chapter 1, draft)
Hey there! Gosh, I'm sorry it took me so long to get to your chapters. You don't deserve to wait. I've had a cold lately that wiped me out so ...
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: Punctuation within Dialogue
This is a great reference! Thank you.
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: One Last Song
Hello there! I will be reviewing you today. Ah, what a refreshing fairy tale. I'm a fairy tale lover myself. (I even posted one just now!) You pulled out the ...
Aug 10, 2010
